Editorial Comments

I just got an article back with really good editing suggestions. Some of it was stylistic changes so the magazine will all match, and there was some rephrasing for clarity. It was a nice change, I seem to either get accepted without a second set of eyes to notice my IE and EI errors, or I get complete rewrite suggestion. “If you could just cut all of this cooperative gameplay stuff and focus on how videogames are bad and should be kept away from children…”